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As a college-level writer you are going to spend the next couple of years being graded on your ability to write clearly. You may think this is unfair, and maybe it is, but thats the way the university is set up. This workshop is designed to help you in one very specific area: that of voice. When we speak of voice in written language, were referring, basically, to the vocabulary and sentence structure. The words you choose and the way you construct your sentences with them will play a large part in determining your grade on a paper -- probably as much as grammar, and spelling, and format. This should strike you as good news, because unlike spelling and grammar, voice can be mastered relatively easily. One of the biggest problems beginning writers face is that they may not have ever been asked to write an essay using the formal conventions of the college-level essay -- and if youve never been taught something, theres no reason in the world you should be expected to know how to do it. Many of these conventions will help you tie your ideas together into readable prose. This in turn will help you clarify your ideas and producing a clear essay that sensibly puts forward logical ideas is all most professors want from you as a student.As a college student, teachers are going to expect you to construct fairly simple sentences that conform to the rules of grammar and that convey your ideas clearly. Before we begin writing a few sentences, lets go over some of the stumbling blocks new writers often hit. Vocabulary inflation: Dont use big words because you think they make you sound intelligent. They dont. They make you sound like someone whos nervous and wants to sound intelligent. The sentence "I crossed the street." is just as clear and much more readable than "I traversed the boulevard." Overuse of introductory/transitional phrases: The words "however" "on the other hand" "thus" and "therefore" should be used only sparingly. They often just clutter your ideas when you could do just as well without them.
Write simple sentences: While you shouldnt turn in a paper with nothing but simple sentences, you should learn to rely on them as beginning writers. As you advance and get used to using college-level conventions, you can begin writing long sentences.
A Practice Exerise:
Now, I want you to take a piece of paper and write a few sentences (six or so) describing the three most important qualities you believe a person should exhibit at a job interview. Remember: use your own vocabulary, avoid transition words, use simple sentence structure. The point here is to get your thoughts on paper in whatever raw form you can. Well polish them up later.
Now, take another ten minutes or so and write a few sentences describing your feelings about the importance of reading and writing in your life. If reading and writing play no role in your life, thats fine, but talk about why. Why dont you read? When you sit in classes and listen to teachers talking about how important reading and writing are, what are you thinking? Why dont you see any value in reading and writing? If you do read, say why you do tell us what you get out of it on a personal level.
What were going to do now, is take some examples of your writing and show you how you can convert the simple sentences youve written off the top of your head into the kinds of paragraphs you can turn in to a professor here at Cleveland State.
Varieties of Tone
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